Silence

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  • Fear

    Poem Commentary

    This poem merely speaks about what it is like to experience phobic fear from time to time.  It it not a reflection of the way I think things should be or are.

    Silence

    Silence
    Is when I'm afraid
    Of my own thoughts
    That sway.

    Before me
    Counting days
    Petrified
    This is the end
    Of time.

    Before, middle
    And after
    I bow before
    My problems
    As they defeat me.

    Relentless
    Crashing waves
    Beating forth
    My ending days.

    Masking
    All I know
    That brings me joy
    'Till then.

    6-7-09

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    Giggle commented on Silence

    09-21-2009

    this is a good view into a phobia. Nicely written, if flows smoothly from the page.

    frog

    09/29/2009

    I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    jademelissa74 commented on Silence

    07-19-2009

    What a wonderful, very insightful piece. It has a painful, anguished content, very well-written and portrayed. You maintain a level of interest throughout the entire piece. Great job!

    optimistic commented on Silence

    07-19-2009

    Great write such pain in the mask of life enjoy every second while its still here for you.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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