The Dawn

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    Sometimes it only takes one.  Sometimes I need to be reminded that I should speak not only for me, because not everyone is capable of doing that.

    The Dawn

    I hear you
    In the peaceful morning
    Of the dawn.

    Breaking the silence
    Is a task
    For only some of us
    To bear.

    8-1-09

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    WordSlinger commented on The Dawn

    08-01-2009

    the gift of day, the present beautiful, morning...

    trocka7 commented on The Dawn

    08-01-2009

    I felt this so deeply, such a short poem, yet so powerful! Beautiful!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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