Summer Of 1884

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    This is a song with a story.

    Summer Of 1884

      In the summer of 1884
    there stood a tavern with a pretty little whore
    I was tending the bar and it was getting late
    for the last drunk to leave she couldn't wait
    That girl looked so tired and way too thin
    I asked her why and her story begins...
      Her parents were gone, her mother died first
    but her father's death hurt much worse
    He was gunned down for a debt he couldn't pay
    that's when they grabbed her and took her away
    In the land of the free and home of the brave
    that poor girl was nothing but a slave...
    I swear I didn't know such a story would be told
    but how could I grow old and let that all unfold?

      She was so scared with no where to turn
    all she knew was that place had to burn
    The whiskey flowed along with her tears
    her eyes couldn't hide her hate and fear
    About that time the owner walked in
    she gave a glance and said, "that's him"
      My boss, the owner, ruled that town
    evil in his heart always took what it found
    He grabbed a bottle from behind the bar
    took her by the hair and said, "we won't go far"
    He had the star of the law on his chest
    I was froze on what to do next...
    I swear I didn't know such a story would be told
    but how could I grow old and let that all unfold?

      My blood boiled as they walked out of sight
    I said to myself, "this is not right"
    The next thing I heard were some thuds and screams
    he wasn't human, he was making her bleed
    When I stormed the room he looked my way
    She grabbed his gun and blew him away
      I helped her dress, we left him there
    his eyes were fixed with a deep dark stare
    She had the heart to end things right
    and set a fire that lit up the night
    With the tavern ablaze she was headin' east
    with a sense of justice and hope for peace...
    I swear I didn't know such a story would be told
    but how could I grow old and let that all unfold?

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    VirtuousVal0812 commented on Summer Of 1884

    01-15-2013

    Your poem touched my heart as I imagined being in the tavern. This has happened to someone I'm sure. Great job!

    tearfuleyes commented on Summer Of 1884

    09-12-2012

    I can honestly say I had goosebumps all the way through this! You are an excellent writer! Keep at it!!!

    KeithAColeman commented on Summer Of 1884

    01-20-2012

    WOWZER!! definitely some great writing. look forward to reading some more of your writings.

    LeslieMay commented on Summer Of 1884

    09-23-2011

    I love this. You are an excellent story teller! :) It's awesome when a few lines pop into your head and the rest just keeps coming to you!! Definitely a fan.

    Worthless commented on Summer Of 1884

    08-29-2011

    I so thought that was a real story, very good! Sadly it probably is somewhere. You should read some of mine when ya get the time like my sister and me and bleeding between the sheets are a few that explains injustice. like mostly all of the other ones i write..

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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