Hole In The Ocean

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    about the gulf oil disaster

    Hole In The Ocean

     There's a hole in the ocean, it's breaking my heart
    didnt have to happen, didnt have to start

    domino effect plain to see
    look what it's doing to the wildlife, to you and to me

    explosive gasses now filling the air
    but
    it looks like the powers that be, dont care


    sea water bubbles
    as HAARP
    does it's thing
    as life continues to try and kling

    the hole in the ocean
    is breaking my heart
    and
    it looks like the end of the world
    is about to start


    people still dart and dash
    while spending their cash
    watching American idol,lady Gaga and Beyonce as well
    as they continue to serve and feed
    this monster from hell



    that hole in the oceran
    gettin bigger still

    tell me
    where is our will

    what is left of mankind
    will be ruled
    with an iron fist
    even now they are putting
    most of us
    on some kind
    of list

    get on your knees now
    in prayer
    get right with God
    if you dare

     

    the hour is late
    dont wait
    dont hesitate

    There's a hole in the ocean
    it's breaking my heart

    HC Holbert

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Hole In The Ocean

    09-04-2010

    that was a fantastic write against the terrible destruction of mother earths ocean with that vile black sludge,,,,,wonderful poem......please do me a favor and post this one in the forums group called "Earth 2.0 Poet Posse" on the topic "free cans/jars of the oceans plastic soup" here is the link, http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/4305 this poem would fit in really well with our group in the fight against this mess. and please watch my video posted there called "Grandmothers Sacred Words". a video poem that I made for this cause........come join this great cause dear friend for your words would be grand and you will also get more readers for your poems...........thanks for sharing.........love asha
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    jtlove commented on Hole In The Ocean

    06-26-2010

    That is how I feel about pornography. It breaks my heart because of all the damage. And do we care? While filling the lust of our flesh on our way to Hell. I love it...get on your knees and pray and get right with God if you dare.....I fully comprehend that and it sure makes one think. If I dare? What if I dare not? Then you will reap what you sow oh fallen man. In tears you will reap what you sow.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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