Someday

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Someday

I saw him tonight
he looked better than ever
he walked right past me
as if i wasn't even there
it's weird that he acts like he cant see me
when i used to be all he could see
i started to say something
but then i saw her
she ran up and kissed you
as if you two were the only ones there
i turned away with tears in my eyes
knowing that i had to forget you
everywhere i lokked i thought i saw you 
but whenever i blinked
someone else was standing in your place.
How can i forget you?
i know i should take down your pictures
put them away
but everytime i try
something inside me say
"He will come back someday."

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laydbak1 commented on Someday

06-10-2009

Awe, this is a nice write... It soooooo, reminds me of one I did more or less on the same subject a couple years ago... And, because I've now read your version of the story from your point of view, I'll go post my version of this story, through the eyes of a young girl who's going through much the same thing... Thank you for reminding me of it... Mine is titled, "Here" if you're interested... Good write, as is all of your poems...

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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