• Letting Go


    I'm invisible now, apparently
    i tried to say hello
    But he did not reply
    Wouldn't even look me in the eyes.
    Is this what it's come to?
    Ignoring each other completely?
    You said you would never stop loving me,
    No matter what.
    Why did I believe you?
    you promised me forever and ever
    when you walk by me, 
    i tried to catch your eye
    but you only looked a few times.
    when you did i saw the hurt in your eyes
    it took everything i had not to start crying
    thats what happens now whenever i hear you
    or hear your name
    or think about you
    or even see you...
    but i just held on to my pride
    while i watched you walk away
    and i tried
    so hard to let go
    but no matter how hard i try
    I'm still hangin on
    be careful what you wish for
    cuz you might just get it all
    and some you don't wish for
    but i cant believe that you were the one
    to build me and and tear me down
    like an old abandend house
    i never saw it comin 
    i should have left you a long time ago

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    laydbak1 commented on Random


    When adults play this silly game with each other, just steering clear of someone's glance would likely be considered a happy ending... Retribution in the form dastardly and spiteful actions and words face to face is more often the norm... You got out lucky... A bit shapeless, considering your other posts, but still a good write in my opinion...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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