Do you remember

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Do you remember

Do you remember the time
we layed out under the stars?
Do you remember the time
you said forever and ever?
Do you remember the time 
you said you'd always be there?
Do you remember the time
you promised me the world?
Do you remember the time
you said I love you?
I believed you. 
They way you said it
It was so beautiful.
Do you remember
that night on the swing?
Do you remember
fallin asleep in you living room
and waking up with me right there by your side?
Do you remember
everything you said,
everything we did?

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laydbak1 commented on Do you remember

06-10-2009

Put it all there on their table... Most of the time, people don't want to be reminded of their deceptions to others; even if they weren't aware they were doing it at the time... But, I think they should always have to read what it caused inside that other person, from that other person, before they're allowed to move on.... Perhaps they'll think twice the next time, before saying things they can't or won't honor later on... Nice write...

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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