Asking You Out...

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Asking You Out...

Look, there you are
How do I say this
Lokk in your eyes
I lose all my words
You are confused
Look away
Think
Look back at you
but not at your eyes
take deep breaths
close my eyes
you ask me questions
i don't answer
how do i do this?
i cant
i make some excuses
you laugh nervously
like you dont know
i walk away
hating myself
for not just saying 
those six words
"Will you go out with me?"
Too late...

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laydbak1 commented on Asking You Out...

11-26-2009

Ah, the cornfuzion of youth... How we all miss it... NOT... lol... Nice piece of work girl... As few words as you used here, I believe most people up to 5 times your age still remember what that was like... And, not a one of us ever want to go back there... lol... You had a spelling glitch and it needs some punctuation tweaks, but a good write... 10 here

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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