Is that me?

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Is that me?

Everytime I look in the mirror
I see a stranger.
Why is my reflection someone I don't know?
Who is that girl...
Starin straght back at me?
I see a tear roll down her face.
But I feel it on mine. 
I see her look like she's lost.
I need to find her...
Figure out who she is...
I see her try to cry out for help.
But hear my voice crying out.
I put my hand out...
But all I feel is glass...
Where is she?
Who is she?
How can I find her?
She looks at me with pleading eyes...
I try to tell her it will be ok...
She can't hear me...
I see another tear roll down her face.
But I feel it on mine.
Then I think...
Is that me??

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laydbak1 commented on Is that me?

06-12-2009

Ah, the visions of ourselves in a new light... I sense the desperation, the sadness, the irony itself of not wanting...to know you're in pain... Great job with the alt-perspective, and using reflective thinking... another very good write girl.. kudo's..

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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