Cutie patootie

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    Cutie patootie

    My little Salma, thats what id call you in my head,
    Same height as her anyway, and beauty no less bred,
    We used to argue over things, silly things, and i enjoyed every moment,
    It meant my involement,

    In a conversation with you, even if we didnt always agree,
    Because i figured that sooner or later there could, should be a you and me,
    I loved your smell, your hair tied back in a bun,
    You looked good in anything you wore, why youd even look good as a nun,
    I loved the way you would hug me sometimes, or lean in behind me when i was sitting and play with my hair,
    Running your fingers through them to feel the curls grace your hands as if they glided across air,

    I wished you had done that more often, but i guess to you it was a privilege and not a right,
    Fiesty woman, at least i knew youd have my back inb a fight,
    Why was I so immature at the time, forgive me for that,
    I just wanted to be your man but didnt know how to persue that,
    YUP! like the women before you, and the women after you, i could not compete and go for the gold,
    Sad isnt it? This story's getting old,

    "Cutie Patootie" Is what youd say when you saw a cute child or cute man,
    I wanted to be called that because i knew then that we could, can,
    Be something great, something wed love and understand,

    But you graduated, got your masters and now rule your world,
    I am just getting my first degree, seems my head was still spinning swirled,
    On youve moved and so have I,
    Should you ever read this poem and wonder why i liked you, now you know why.

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    Charlie23 commented on Cutie patootie

    03-19-2010

    Your poems always make me smile... I enjoy your humor. I think I've probably mentioned that before.

    Sydney commented on Cutie patootie

    02-20-2010

    wow, this is absolutely beautifully written. i love the flow you wrote in this. and great imagery and emotion. its just so beautiful. a 10. - Sydney

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    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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