The Emotional-Physical Touch of a Woman

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A small piece on my description of touch with a woman and its affects one me....

The Emotional-Physical Touch of a Woman

Written on 11-5-2010.. Edited on 11-9-2010    42 Lines

Something I deem so rare,
Seems to flee me like the moving air,
The touch of any woman I desire, i long for it so,
I long so much i cant let her go,

But she was never mine to begin with so on I must,
Having only my heart to trust,
That opprotunity, moment, will come again,
The last woman I touched I actually held,
In my heart tears of joy weld,
She was fully clothed and all I felt was soft,
Beating heart and body whose hair was aloft,

It felt so good, I knew I belonged,
If she were famous many a man would have thronged,
It was as if the dragon in me awoke and breathed fire,
I just wanted to hold her withouth retire,
I wanted to feel her face, body against mine,
Observe the refelction on her face, a moonshine,
Phsically bond with her, lose time,
And gain it back over a glass of wine,

Her touch felt so good that i began to day dream we were laying on the couch,
Cuddled as one, comfortable, at ease without slouch,
Cheeck upon cheek her busom into my pelvis,
Her beautiful toes twinkling my feet like Elvis,
Face nuzzled into hers as we look at the tube,
She turning suddently, me feeling the warmth of her boob,

Giving me the eternal starem eyes locked wondering intent,
"Thy thoughts be good, or should we kneel and repent?"
Our smiles meet and lips connect,
Hearts wide open, baring nothing to protect,
Doesnt matter! Her physical presence and touch trumps all,
I hold her peacefully like a stream leading to a waterfall,

You! You people man, you really dont know,
You take for granted what to me is as white as snow,
You get this with ease whereas this is something i must earn,
You toy with it daily while in my heart it is what I yearn,

Phhhhh! I cant speak to the ignorant, the "I dont care",
I sit trying to figure when I too will participate instead of wonder with an icy stare,
Just know that while there are many things I want this one of the few I want the most,
I'll chase it as long as I live, even in death as angel, ghost.

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winterkou commented on The Emotional-Physical Touch of a Woman

01-11-2011

This is a great poem , elaborate and full of awesome imagery. The way you describe everything in this poem really draws in the reader .

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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