Luke King's Dracula: Final Chapter

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By far the longest poem in the series, I thought of breaking it up. If i get enough feedback that says i should, then this will be split up into two poems. Anyway, stay tuned, theres a twisted for lover boy in this one. :)

Luke King's Dracula: Final Chapter

Luke King's Dracula: Final Chapter   171  Lines


Now the great one told him that a light would be shown on the demon,
And that when Dracula saw the light his rage would be a beaming,
And as was spoken to him by the great one all came to pass,
Dracula was as angry as a 1000 Lions on the mass,
And the light shone and he was ready to strike,
But to his anguish he was stunned, like when Buster Douglas knocked out Mike,

The light shown through and it was his lover, the vampire next to him,
Now she was in true form towering over him,
Eyes with the fires of hell, teeth sharper than anything, living or dead,
His toughest battle was sure to make him bled,
He could not believe this, was the great one playing a cruel trick,
Meanwhile the demons rage ever so ticked,

"
Come on Lover boy! Battle on!
I promise we wont fight all day long,"
Like lighting the vampire king struck quick and fast,
Knocked this demon down so hard she broke open a valley of fire like the ground breaks glass,
Dracula approached the she demon and looked in disbelief,
"
Tell me its not true?" he looked down wanting inner relief,
But the she demon was enraged and knocked him so,
Hell gave a hoolin howling yippy yi yay, yippy yo,

Lucifer swooped in and knocked Dracula right back down as he arose,
Touched the she demon to give her more power than she ever possessed ,opposed,
In his heart Dracula listened with a great moan,
As tears welled and his future actions would cause him to groan,

"
For 2,500 years I roamed the earth,
Even the fires of hell just to look for what I thought was re-birth,
Turns out the great one had a greater plan that I could not see,
Didnt know it would cost me the thing that would make me happy,"

But the great one spoke to his heart and told him what to do,
"
Stand fast Dracula, you must press on through and through,
She was evil long before you took her life and slayed many not in my name,
Serves her right that hell is her fate just the same,
She lured you with her cunning, and if you had met her earlier you would have met a deadly fate,
It would have been you who would be less than nothing, not even a soul in its present state,
So hard as this might be my child, you must fight to extinguish her soul,
Lest she rise to do great evil in more places than the north pole,"

"
But who will keep me company, not a one on earth looked as her,
How in the days of heaven, will I go on, go further, "
"
For all of the charm I have given you, you still have much to learn,
Kill this demon, and let her soul burn,
You have to trust in what I say, though every moment you wait the task will become more difficult to be done,
I promise you it will be well worth the blood spilt and won"

So the vampire king rose and he rose with tears in his eyes,
More powerful now, the she demon transfigured to her beauty form to give him deceit, demise,
Just when Dracula was to strike at the same time,
His mighty claws pulled back, at was once a woman so fine,
She reaches out to touch him and he cant help but drop his guard,
And as those soft hands seem to give him rescue, a firey hand slaps him hard,

And he sails high in the air, fire and brimstone all around,
Flying upward and back, he knows he's gonna hit the ground,
But quick as lighting she meets him up there, that wicked she demon, and knocks his ass on down,
If he didnt get with the program, he'd soon look like a serious clown,

In rage he roars loudly, like the roar of a thousand Lions,
Fire and brimstone are obliterated, like the main enemy of the Myans,
Dracula is in full form, glorious with fangs ready,
He prepares to strike this she demon down and brutally beat her steady,
As she charges he takes a mighty swipe and crushes her jawbone,
Sailling back hard she will soon meet a firery stone,

But his speed is unrivaled, he sees her quickly coming,
And uses 1, 2, 3 kicks that sent her the other way spiraling,
Now he goes for the kill, time to sleep, say goodnight,
He rises high in the air ready to strike with all his might,
But she full of cunning, has one more trick up her sleeve,
She transfigures right before the strike and crashes from the mighty heave,

"
NO!" Says he who is king, king of they that are vampires,
Blood drips from her body as he approaches and enquires,
His look of horror when he sees her blood flowing out from her,
Powerful as he may be, he cannot heal her,
Tears flow down from him for she has his heart,
Or at least almost to the end of what is now tearing him apart,

He goes to caress her face as the tears drop on her suppine body,
Impossible to see that that for him in heaven there is more than a greater somebody,
"
I wont let you die! You can leave this place and reign with me,
Together you and I will know peace and be happy,
And a tear falls from her face for she knows it cannot be done,
"Kill me before I turn back and the battle by me will surely be won,"

"
I CANT!" "YES YOU CAN!"  "she said, you must do what is against your heart,
In this moment and in this moment alone you have caught my only glimpse of goodness that was with me only at the start,
I had all the time in the world to change my life from wrong to right,
But this is the path I've chosen and I must cease to exist tonight,
Fulfill the promise that was given to you before it will be too late,
You are so close to glory I'll never know, I've long since sealed my fate,"

Dracula wept bitterly for he never thought in all his battles,
That what he wanted most is what he had to let go to for better life and travels,
With a mighty roar he gripped her throat and flung her straight up in the air,
She flew about 11 feet up, and he jumped to meet her there,
Her body hung, and beautiful hair shown for the final time,
The vampire king got into striking pose and struck his hand into her chest past breast that felt so prime,
Into her heart he pulled her soul from her spine,
Like slow motion movies where the final move seems so slow, but moves just fine,
Dracula held her soul and extinguished it just in time,

Then the heavens opened and as promised the chariot came,
But Dracula transfigured, his features no longer the same,
He grew wings angels carry, and was bestowed power he'd never known,
Though if you withnessed this yourself, youd think he went from a boy to fully grown,

And he looked down on Lucifer who gave him a seething glare,
He simply looked back, and gave Lucifer the finger with a smiling stare,
Turned and looked to the heavens for glory and greatness await,
"
Did I do what was right " he kept thinking, "Or am I simply the bait,"

The great one sat at his throne, high up in the heavens above,
And beautiful angels sang songs sweeter than the sweetest dove,

"
Come close my child come hither, For now you have glory and reign with me as one,
Whatever you desire you can have under the heavenly sun,
You thought you had life in hell and on earth but you aint seen nothing yet,
Your powers are unlimited see what you can do when you set,
Your new found heart and mind to something, go ahead and create,"

And the desire of his heart was the one he lost for he only loved her,
And just as he was about to re-create her he decided to set his eyes further,
And saw a woman, angel, some being of female descent,
Whose glory was so powerful, even the great one bowed as if to repent,
Not that she was over the great one, but that he respected her glory,
Dracula, amazed at her beauty, saw that she definitely was worth his former glory,
Her eyes were of gold,
And hair brown that flowed,
And skin sparkling of radiance and beauty,
She was so much more than an earthly cutie,
Put the angels who sang to the great one to shame,
Dracula was astonished that it was his way she came,

Then he remembered the old charm given to him by the great one and saw that its power was now unrivaled,
Decided that this female being was far more worthy as he marveled,
He approached her, said hello, and sweetly said his name,
That alone was enough for her, she was his, a sweet dame,
Engulfed in each other they new couple takes off to explore heaven,
To see a world that has no bounderies and is not unleavened,

The Great one calls out to Dracula, to thank him for being kind and true,
Then tells him to look at his new found being and what should he find as his glue,
She whose life he took on earth and hell, united eternally,
Joy sprung in Dracula in ways he never known,
He picked her up and held her close, eyes locked, intimately, at peace with himself to see the flower before him from the seed he once sown.


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Lunabella commented on Luke King's Dracula: Final Chapter

01-24-2011

awwww :'D its so cute and sweet im so happy for ya dracula :)

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