Ennui
Time sloughed its metronome precisionAt the point where I made a decision
Held thus that single moment of time
As if it were frozen in an icy rime
Ennui
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At the point where I made a decision
Held thus that single moment of time
As if it were frozen in an icy rime
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10-27-2009
- I love your titles! I was listening to talk radio a year or so ago and the speaker said, "I like that word that the French you for weariness, or lassitude. Then he said the word was...oui !!! I thought I was going to fall out of the car, but it was funny. I like what you did with this.
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06-05-2009
- deliberate in it's few words. Rhymes placed with careful intention. The last line's revelation leaves me in awe. (Fleeting thoughts of Beowulf or the Rime of the Ancient Mariner). ginga
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