Five Minutes

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    Five Minutes

    Footsteps, rhythm, and cadence across the floor
    A log in the fire and it once again leapt
    Ignored the dishes (an outstanding chore)
    A short reach into the pantry where tea is kept

    Pot whistles and I begin to pour
    Steam rises caressing my hands and face
    Footsteps, rhythm and cadence across the floor
    Trebling cup marks the pace

    Punctuation the click of the study door
    It’s all music to my inner ear
    Ease waltzes in to my core
    The one moment strung out so dear

    Footsteps, discord, cacophony racing across the floor
    Cherubic barbarians are at the gate
    Punctuation the click of the study door
    A crescendo of tidings to relate

    I step into the breach with a languid smile
    Stoically submitting to my fate
    I listen and let their tales beguile
    When I finish my tea it will be cold and late

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    nugen966 commented on Five Minutes

    10-28-2009

    I am not a fan of rhyming poems but at times, they read to elementry. That said, I love this poem. You took a single moment and brought life to it. I had to read it a couple times to finally see the picture but when I did, you opened my eyes. Great work.

    nadronnoco commented on Five Minutes

    10-22-2009

    well I mustsay i like this one alot.... when youused begulied i can only think of clint eastwood though. best wishes

    ginga commented on Five Minutes

    07-22-2009

    I want to say what a tea party, but that would be too trivial. This is a wonderful take on rhythm, song, and generally seems harmless until... the cherubic barbarians appear. What an eerie ending. A great imagination at work here and Alice and the white rabbit weren't even invited. Ginga

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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