Softly falling snow

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    Softly falling snow

    I awoke feeling restless
    And so poked and prodded the embers of a fire gone listless
    I placed the kettle on the stove
    My thoughts were lost in a darkened tangled grove
    As the dawn upwards crept
    Not reluctantly my thoughts into hidden places swept
    I tended to the fire
    Speeding towards a point of light I did aspire
    The kettle began to blow
    I, I had found a place of softly falling snow
    Setting about I made a cup of tea
    Almost subconsciously, I was lost in that reverie
    The fire again burned low
    For I was lost in thoughts of a softly falling snow

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    Redrose77 commented on Softly falling snow

    02-07-2010

    that was very nice to read. I felt like i was there in a cabin of sorts. Thanks for sharing ur gift.
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    bklynrizz commented on Softly falling snow

    01-18-2010

    This was an excellent poem. I was able to imagine everything you vividly. As I read this I felt peace. Great job.
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    christianprep commented on Softly falling snow

    12-13-2009

    great poem with wonderful words prononced in it. It looks as if you put time into your poems? there really good can you do me a favore and look at my newist poem called simiple flame? and tell me what i could do to make it better? i am having trouble making it sound the way i want it? thxks..http://www.originalpoetry.com/simple-flames
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    stellar commented on Softly falling snow

    12-10-2009

    Very very nice poem...Mind-reality,.,mind-reality...I like the working of the conscious and the connection between mind and objects...Totally love your style ^_^ v
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    jademelissa74 commented on Softly falling snow

    12-09-2009

    A beautiful, tender poem. The serenity that you painted was remarkable. "Softly falling snow" says it all. Great job.
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