Filling Out This Hole

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    Filling Out This Hole

     Somehow this hole feels halved,
    But I couldn't have dug half a hole.
    I was perfect and content
    Until I ran into a wall:
    My hole was halved.
    I peek my eyes over the rim of my hole.
    My toes are barely touching the bottom.
    As I scan the surface,
    I notice many souls,
    All digging holes.
    Some souls have partners.
    I would bet their holes are whole,
    Not halved like mine.
    Others,
    They just sit on the ground.
    They sit on a pile of dirt
    Where a hole was filled...
    All this time I've been searching for
    Someone to complete my hole,
    When all I needed was a soul
    To fill it...

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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