What I've Become

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    • Jayandben
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    You know that feeling when you look into the mirror and you see dreadful things?

    What I've Become

     A world of defiance
    Slowly incinerates my soul
    An empowered magnate
    Laughs at my entity
    There's no way to evade
    Such a gruesome place
    For everywhere I turn
    Is a dreadful void
    A tongue enveloped
    In disastrous lies
    A hand that clutches
    So many souls' last breaths
    And the thoughts
    That annihilate
    The ability to reminisce
    Oh, what a brutal monster
    A restless rogue
    My being has come to be
    For I cannot escape such dread
    Simply because
    Such dread is me

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    TwilightLover commented on What I've Become

    02-10-2010

    I love it. Great job. Ill be here to talk about anything u need.
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    BringMeBullets commented on What I've Become

    01-12-2010

    "Such dread is me." I know how that feels. Good job with your descriptions. It would break my heart if you actually felt like this...If you do, you know who to call! (Not Ghostbusters, silly...Me!) He he. Good job. :)
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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