What I've Become

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  • Jayandben
  • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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You know that feeling when you look into the mirror and you see dreadful things?

What I've Become

A world of defiance
Slowly incinerates my soul
An empowered magnate
Laughs at my entity
There's no way to evade
Such a gruesome place
For everywhere I turn
Is a dreadful void
A tongue enveloped
In disastrous lies
A hand that clutches
So many souls' last breaths
And the thoughts
That annihilate
The ability to reminisce
Oh, what a brutal monster
A restless rogue
My being has come to be
For I cannot escape such dread
Simply because
Such dread is me

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TwilightLover commented on What I've Become

02-10-2010

I love it. Great job. Ill be here to talk about anything u need.

BringMeBullets commented on What I've Become

01-12-2010

"Such dread is me." I know how that feels. Good job with your descriptions. It would break my heart if you actually felt like this...If you do, you know who to call! (Not Ghostbusters, silly...Me!) He he. Good job. :)

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