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    • Jayandben
    • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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    My thoughts on poetry


    Spilled out
    Like blood onto the paper
    With the darkest of inks
    And the deepest of thoughts

    Sometimes the thoughts
    You wish to explain
    Come out in words
    And that is why there is poetry

    A key to every door
    So that you can open
    Every opportunity
    And embrace them

    A broken heart
    That bleeds your love
    Across the paper
    Whether lost or present

    A brush against a canvas
    Of purity
    And serenity
    And sometimes death

    Spilled out
    Like blood onto the paper
    With the darkest of inks
    And the deepest of thoughts
    To create
    A life
    In poetry

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    TwilightLover commented on Poetry


    I love it and am adding it to my favorites. keep writing more.



    Thank you so much! It means a lot that you think such things of my writing :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    Jayandben’s Poems (39)

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    Yesterday's Horizon 1
    Can't be Cut Away 1
    Every Fairytale 0
    Who Would Believe 0
    Saving You 1
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    The Greatest Desire 0
    Drowning Soul 1
    Dear Ben 0
    Going Back Home 0
    Our Last Mourning 0
    No Longer A Home Of Mine 1
    What A Light 1
    Vampiric Desires 0
    Elizabeth Smith 0
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    All The Pieces 2
    RIOT 1
    All These Windows 1
    Where Has The Love Gone? 1
    (A Part of a Project I Made For Class) Lost Episode os Odysseus 0
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    So Close 1
    The Path we Take 3
    A Home to my Soul 2
    Taking Over 1
    What I've Become 2
    Best Friend 2
    I'll Be Here 1
    Falling For Sin 1
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