All The Pieces

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  • Deception
    • Jayandben
    • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

    All The Pieces

    I watch so many hearts
    Fall down all around me.
    I feel their acid tears
    Pressing against my face
    Like the desperate
    Winds of time.
    Hollow voices envelope
    My hopeless being
    And lift me to the stars.
    The sky is vast and utterly dark,
    The stars: so bright and full.
    Feeling such odd emotions
    (Such as joy,
    Excitement, and wonder)
    A smile dances onto
    My now-beautifully-colored face.
    But, suddenly,
    The awesome light burns.
    I scream in horror
    Only to hear utter silence,
    And I fall.
    With the other dreams,
    I fall
    Onto the shattered hopes below
    And, now, I am surrounded
    By the broken pieces
    Of my heart.

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    SavVySam commented on All The Pieces

    01-19-2010

    You write quite beautifully, with very mature thoughts. Keep writing!

    BringMeBullets commented on All The Pieces

    12-23-2009

    This is beautiful. I like it a lot. I love emotional poems like this because I think they say so much about how someone is feeling. I just hope you don't feel like this. It's awfully sad. :(

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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