Who Would Believe

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    Society is conformity

    Who Would Believe

    The world watches me
    Fall down to my knees
    Like a sitcom
    On some television screen,
    But who would believe
    Somebody so young
    Could fall?

    My heart is shattered
    All over the floor
    Like a window
    That's kicked to peices,
    But who would believe
    Hearts so pure
    Could break so easy?

    My mind pulses through
    Painful memories
    Like a montage
    Made to bring my down,
    But who would believe
    A little girl
    Like me?

    Society just smiles
    As I'm pushed to the ground,
    Like a leaf,
    Falling is natural.
    So who would believe
    That society
    Was wrong?

    Who would believe
    We all could fall?
    Who would believe
    We all could break?
    Who would believe
    We all have an opinion?
    Who would believe
    In what's inhumane?

    Society...

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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