Last Kiss

5 Comments

  • Jayandben
  • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

Poem Commentary

Hope you like it!

Last Kiss

No matter the distance I run
No matter the places I hide
You always find it quite fun
To tear me up inside

When I think you have my heart
When I think I know you well
You throw it oh-so far
And put my soul through hell

Every time I pull you close
Every time I feel your breath
I just want another dose
Of that lust-scented death

I have a crush on Death
I have a desire to be embraced
Everybody else has left
So long, this desire I've chased

But you have to say goodbye
But you have to dismiss
Our love with a hefty sigh
And one last kiss...

Poem Comments

(5)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Kristie commented on Last Kiss

06-04-2010

OMG love it kawa!!!! my fav two lines were "Of that lust-scented death" and "I have a crush on Death" lol yay love yas

TwilightLover commented on Last Kiss

02-10-2010

This is a great poem. Keep writing more. I am adding your stuff to my favorites.

Jayandben

03/13/2010

Thank you so much! I appreciate all comments and your support is very enlightening

BringMeBullets commented on Last Kiss

02-09-2010

This is sad, friend. But very good. You have always been very good at writing. I like this one, and it appears to be your newest? I hope that things are going good for you... Much love.

Jayandben

03/13/2010

I'm glad you like it :) but I just posted a new one called No Longer A Home Of Mine

girlygirl1234 commented on Last Kiss

02-07-2010

oh my judas. i loved this poem. its very beautiful. and very emotional

Jayandben

03/13/2010

THANKS and I liked the oh my judas

WinterFrost commented on Last Kiss

02-05-2010

Les épreuves de notre jeunesse, donnent nous la sagesse de notre Moyen Âge, et aux mémoires de notre vieillesse.

Jayandben

06/11/2010

Je suis d'accord definitey, bon garçon.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Jayandben’s Poems (39)

Title Comments
Title Comments
A Voice 0
No Such Thing as Stars 2
Sweet Remedies 0
Now I've Forgotten 0
Filling Out This Hole 0
Are You the Savior 1
Never Too Late 3
Yesterday's Horizon 1
Can't be Cut Away 1
Every Fairytale 0
Who Would Believe 0
Saving You 1
Rather Be Crazy 0
The Greatest Desire 0
Drowning Soul 1
Dear Ben 0
Going Back Home 0
Our Last Mourning 0
No Longer A Home Of Mine 1
What A Light 1
Vampiric Desires 0
Elizabeth Smith 0
Poetry 1
Last Kiss 5
All The Pieces 2
RIOT 1
All These Windows 1
Where Has The Love Gone? 1
(A Part of a Project I Made For Class) Lost Episode os Odysseus 0
Such Contradiction
s
2
So Close 1
The Path we Take 3
A Home to my Soul 2
Taking Over 1
What I've Become 2
Best Friend 2
I'll Be Here 1
Falling For Sin 1
You showed me 3