Last Kiss


  • Jayandben
  • Chillin' and writin' the life ^.^

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Last Kiss

No matter the distance I run
No matter the places I hide
You always find it quite fun
To tear me up inside

When I think you have my heart
When I think I know you well
You throw it oh-so far
And put my soul through hell

Every time I pull you close
Every time I feel your breath
I just want another dose
Of that lust-scented death

I have a crush on Death
I have a desire to be embraced
Everybody else has left
So long, this desire I've chased

But you have to say goodbye
But you have to dismiss
Our love with a hefty sigh
And one last kiss...

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Kristie commented on Last Kiss


OMG love it kawa!!!! my fav two lines were "Of that lust-scented death" and "I have a crush on Death" lol yay love yas

TwilightLover commented on Last Kiss


This is a great poem. Keep writing more. I am adding your stuff to my favorites.



Thank you so much! I appreciate all comments and your support is very enlightening

BringMeBullets commented on Last Kiss


This is sad, friend. But very good. You have always been very good at writing. I like this one, and it appears to be your newest? I hope that things are going good for you... Much love.



I'm glad you like it :) but I just posted a new one called No Longer A Home Of Mine

girlygirl1234 commented on Last Kiss


oh my judas. i loved this poem. its very beautiful. and very emotional



THANKS and I liked the oh my judas

WinterFrost commented on Last Kiss


Les épreuves de notre jeunesse, donnent nous la sagesse de notre Moyen Âge, et aux mémoires de notre vieillesse.



Je suis d'accord definitey, bon garçon.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Jayandben’s Poems (39)

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No Such Thing as Stars 2
Sweet Remedies 0
Now I've Forgotten 0
Filling Out This Hole 0
Are You the Savior 1
Never Too Late 3
Yesterday's Horizon 1
Can't be Cut Away 1
Every Fairytale 0
Who Would Believe 0
Saving You 1
Rather Be Crazy 0
The Greatest Desire 0
Drowning Soul 1
Dear Ben 0
Going Back Home 0
Our Last Mourning 0
No Longer A Home Of Mine 1
What A Light 1
Vampiric Desires 0
Elizabeth Smith 0
Poetry 1
Last Kiss 5
All The Pieces 2
All These Windows 1
Where Has The Love Gone? 1
(A Part of a Project I Made For Class) Lost Episode os Odysseus 0
Such Contradiction
So Close 1
The Path we Take 3
A Home to my Soul 2
Taking Over 1
What I've Become 2
Best Friend 2
I'll Be Here 1
Falling For Sin 1
You showed me 3