Last Kiss

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  • Depart
    • Jayandben
    • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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    Last Kiss

     No matter the distance I run
    No matter the places I hide
    You always find it quite fun
    To tear me up inside

    When I think you have my heart
    When I think I know you well
    You throw it oh-so far
    And put my soul through hell

    Every time I pull you close
    Every time I feel your breath
    I just want another dose
    Of that lust-scented death

    I have a crush on Death
    I have a desire to be embraced
    Everybody else has left
    So long, this desire I've chased

    But you have to say goodbye
    But you have to dismiss
    Our love with a hefty sigh
    And one last kiss...

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    Kristie commented on Last Kiss

    06-04-2010

    OMG love it kawa!!!! my fav two lines were "Of that lust-scented death" and "I have a crush on Death" lol yay love yas
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    TwilightLover commented on Last Kiss

    02-10-2010

    This is a great poem. Keep writing more. I am adding your stuff to my favorites.
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    Thank you so much! I appreciate all comments and your support is very enlightening

    BringMeBullets commented on Last Kiss

    02-09-2010

    This is sad, friend. But very good. You have always been very good at writing. I like this one, and it appears to be your newest? I hope that things are going good for you... Much love.
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    I'm glad you like it :) but I just posted a new one called No Longer A Home Of Mine

    girlygirl1234 commented on Last Kiss

    02-07-2010

    oh my judas. i loved this poem. its very beautiful. and very emotional
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    Jayandben

    03/13/2010

    THANKS and I liked the oh my judas

    WinterFrost commented on Last Kiss

    02-05-2010

    Les épreuves de notre jeunesse, donnent nous la sagesse de notre Moyen Âge, et aux mémoires de notre vieillesse.
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    Jayandben

    06/11/2010

    Je suis d'accord definitey, bon garçon.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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