Are You the Savior

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  • Jayandben
  • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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Short, but it's an unfinished song I'm working on :)

Are You the Savior

Watch me,
Hear me,
Hold me
As I choke on my last breath.
Listen
Closely:
Hold these
Words in your heart 'til your death.
Maybe you can see around the darkness.
Maybe...
Maybe you can see the purity,
Just maybe
You can be our savior
Of our hopes,
Of our wishes,
Oh, of our dreams
For they do fade...

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MarkKarmel commented on Are You the Savior

12-13-2012

you should finish it. you have a habit of being incredibly accurate with your words when you leave things unfinished.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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