All These Windows

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  • Jayandben
  • Chillin' and writin'...living the life ^.^

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I hope this will help you rebuild your room...

All These Windows

Open windows
Used to paint this hollow room
That holds my thoughts,
But now those windows
Are shattered,
Crushed upon the floor.
I guess my thoughts
Were too wild for
This dreadful room to hold.
Every shard of glass
That resides upon the floor
Is another dream,
Another heart,
Another friend,
Lost or crushed.
And,
For many days,
These windows have been
Laid out on this floor.

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BringMeBullets commented on All These Windows

12-23-2009

I like the way you compared all those things to windows. I also really like the ending. It's perfect. Love this poem. I'll be submitting some new ones soon. So should you! :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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