Goodbye
Smile, you were chosenThis moment has me frozen
Even though you oppose
Something special pulls
As your tragic heartbeat fades
You enter the grave
Goodbye
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Tags: Dark Poetry
This moment has me frozen
Even though you oppose
Something special pulls
As your tragic heartbeat fades
You enter the grave
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DylanAKayanN commented on Goodbye
03-04-2011
- It's good, it's really good, but its short, I think you should make is longer, and more mystery before the end.. It is good though.
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