Goodbye

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Goodbye

Smile, you were chosen
This moment has me frozen
Even though you oppose

Something special pulls
As your tragic heartbeat fades
You enter the grave

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DylanAKayanN commented on Goodbye

03-04-2011

It's good, it's really good, but its short, I think you should make is longer, and more mystery before the end.. It is good though.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Kaiprin’s Poems (43)

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What Words Couldn't Say 7
Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y]) 3
Clarity Haiku 3
Forsaken Haiku 4
Why Should We Try? Haiku 1
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Goodbye 1
Late At Night 2
American Ido( l / n't ) 3
Haiku Tangent: What Does It Really Mean? 2
When It's Over 2
Haiku Part 5: The Ghuzal Tragedy 3
Haiku Part 4: Appeal 1
Haiku Part 3: Prey 2
Haiku Part 2: Regrets 7
Haiku Part 1: Safe and Warm 8
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The Other Side of Me 3
Raindrops on My Piano 2
Look Through Me 2
Any Other Way 1
Changing Chance 1
As I Am 1
Apart 3
The Weekend Sand 2
Why Worry 2
As I Lie Here 3
Broken 3
Two 1
Here To Stay 1
She Won't 2
Slow Down Mister Steep 1
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Who's That Lady 3
Begin Again 0
Quitting Again 1
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Facing the Truth 1
Moving On 4