Who's That Lady

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Who's That Lady

Softly, gently, I see her standing there
I'm her shadow and she's not even aware
Of how much I long to indulge in her world
Or how much I long to give her red hair a twirl
Her umbrella blocks her provocative stare
From my gaze as I dream of her laying bare
She strolls my way with the perfume of confidence
I stand erect as she peers down with a smile
She seems to have noticed my look, my style
She's toying with a master of intrigue and guile
Yet I do not even possess her number to dial
As she passes I catch a scent of physical perfection
Her overcoat clings to her frame like interrupted protection
For one look, one glance, one stare, one chance
To be hooked, in stance, in the air, sealed with a miss
Into the night she went, gone like the airy mist
Tomorrow my obssession will not even know I exist
Yet the thought of seeing her again is eternal bliss

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Hiporlacking commented on Who's That Lady

12-12-2009

This is an interesting write. My favorite line is {She strolls my way with the perfume of confidence.}

Jayandben commented on Who's That Lady

12-11-2009

I liked your rhyme scheme and the way you described your desires :) well-written

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Kaiprin’s Poems (43)

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Forsaken 0
Hatred’s Plea 3
Insanity's Fire 1
Walking in Circles, Waiting for Yesterday's Kiss 1
What Words Couldn't Say 7
Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y]) 3
Clarity Haiku 3
Forsaken Haiku 4
Why Should We Try? Haiku 1
The Evening News Haiku 1
Goodbye 1
Late At Night 2
American Ido( l / n't ) 3
Haiku Tangent: What Does It Really Mean? 2
When It's Over 2
Haiku Part 5: The Ghuzal Tragedy 3
Haiku Part 4: Appeal 1
Haiku Part 3: Prey 2
Haiku Part 2: Regrets 7
Haiku Part 1: Safe and Warm 8
Visions of Me In California 3
The Other Side of Me 3
Raindrops on My Piano 2
Look Through Me 2
Any Other Way 1
Changing Chance 1
As I Am 1
Apart 3
The Weekend Sand 2
Why Worry 2
As I Lie Here 3
Broken 3
Two 1
Here To Stay 1
She Won't 2
Slow Down Mister Steep 1
Unwanted Progress 2
Who's That Lady 3
Begin Again 0
Quitting Again 1
Hardly Hidden 0
Facing the Truth 1
Moving On 4