She Won't

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  • Anger

    She Won't

     You’re so self-centered
    Don’t even realize
    That helping others
    Is your little disguise
    You walk around in
    Your own little world
    Reminiscing about when
    You were a little girl

    Grow Up can change yourself
    Grow up and be something else
    Grow up before I go away
    Grown up:  live your life this way

    The banter we have
    Is like a nagging calf
    I’m not sure you understand
    That I’m not your plan
    You seem to believe
    That your kindness exceeds
    The inattentive nature
    You presently lead

    Grow Up and change yourself
    Grow up and be something else
    Grow up before I go away
    Grown up:  live your life this way

    The sad things are true
    About the history of you
    Learn to admit when you are it
    And your troubles are causing you fits

    You refuse to change
    You follow my range
    I laugh because you’re vain
    When you deny it, it’s plain.

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    cluegirl160 commented on She Won't

    03-25-2010

    great poem but its a bit creepy because it sounds like my life.but i still loved it!
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    icu2 commented on She Won't

    12-05-2009

    Very interesting. So many people hang onto baggage of the past. We all have a sad tale to tell. Like you said, grow up and move on...get over it. TEN
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    Kaiprin

    12/07/2009

    Why thank you. Thank you very much.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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