What Words Couldn't Say

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    All you need is (Love) is all you need

    What Words Couldn't Say

    I decided to hear you speak

    Listening didn't make me weak
    Often, I've made you suffer and weep
    Virtue made promises I couldn't keep
    Every hug from you makes me feel complete

    Your smile bedaazzles me even when I mistreat
    Other eyes cannot illuminate or hope to compete
    Unforgettable moments make what we have concrete

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    kdarcy commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    11-20-2010

    Nice write, short and sweet but said it all, well done, stop by and read me if you find moment, thanks, be well k

    cluegirl160 commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    03-17-2010

    Loved it as usual.it always amazes me how u can make such wonderful poems.keep it up!

    danmartyjake1 commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    02-28-2010

    Nice expression of feelings that are hard to convey clearly sometimes. You did it very well.

    BringMeBullets commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    02-16-2010

    You are wonderful, as is your poem. I like this one a lot. Every stanza says something different, and it all ties into something beautiful. Great write. :)

    Tempy commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    01-29-2010

    i like being bedazzeled or mystified this was a small but pleasant read

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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