What Words Couldn't Say

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    All you need is (Love) is all you need

    What Words Couldn't Say

     I decided to hear you speak

    Listening didn't make me weak
    Often, I've made you suffer and weep
    Virtue made promises I couldn't keep
    Every hug from you makes me feel complete

    Your smile bedaazzles me even when I mistreat
    Other eyes cannot illuminate or hope to compete
    Unforgettable moments make what we have concrete

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    kdarcy commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    11-20-2010

    Nice write, short and sweet but said it all, well done, stop by and read me if you find moment, thanks, be well k
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    cluegirl160 commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    03-17-2010

    Loved it as usual.it always amazes me how u can make such wonderful poems.keep it up!
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    danmartyjake1 commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    02-28-2010

    Nice expression of feelings that are hard to convey clearly sometimes. You did it very well.
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    BringMeBullets commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    02-16-2010

    You are wonderful, as is your poem. I like this one a lot. Every stanza says something different, and it all ties into something beautiful. Great write. :)
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    Tempy commented on What Words Couldn't Say

    01-29-2010

    i like being bedazzeled or mystified this was a small but pleasant read
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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