Forsaken Haiku

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    Forsaken Haiku

    In my dream, we fly
    Over countries in the sky
    Watching nature die

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    Tempestlady commented on Forsaken Haiku

    12-10-2010

    I have one called polar bears. You would really appreciate it i think as much as i appreciated this. Well done, and loved the pic.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Forsaken Haiku

    02-28-2010

    This is a great one, too. I enjoyed the feelings that came with it as I read it. It has a universal quality. Very nice write!

    BringMeBullets commented on Forsaken Haiku

    01-07-2010

    This is sad. If nature is lost, then so is everything else. But how beautiful this is. In fact, I think I will try to write a poem like this to add to my collection. Great write. :)

    Rhymer commented on Forsaken Haiku

    12-23-2009

    More of a nightmare I think, to loose nature is to lose ourselves. Excellent Haiku leads one to think about more than themselves 10 from me.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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