Haiku Part 2: Regrets

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    Life is a journey one lesson at a time.

    Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    Here I stand alone
    Lifeless in the twilight zone
    Aimlessly I moan

    While only you heard
    I lived tragically
    Ignoring your word

    My dead voice whispers
    It vents over what occurred
    A line is now blurred

    Shadows are silent
    They will never tell a thing
    Or threaten to wring

    Today stranded me
    Other people branded me
    Apalled, I take pause

    Rise and Rescue Me
    Deceive Immaturity
    Throw away my flaws

    Howling for my head,
    Indecisions lie and tread
    Champion my cause

    Where do I belong?
    Where 'I am sorry' is wrong?
    I hurt you a lot

    No Justice is free
    Integrity costs a fee
    Forgiveness is naught


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    danmartyjake1 commented on Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    02-28-2010

    Beautiful writing....................You are definitely talented!

    sandyb commented on Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    12-24-2009

    Another great write. keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    dahlusion commented on Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    12-22-2009

    "My dead voice whispers It vents over what occurred A line is now blurred" — simply powerful like pure rain leveling the disturbance of dust. You are an experience in poetry happening fully as I write this thought(s).

    SmallFrie commented on Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    12-22-2009

    love the line "Throw away my flaws"!! nice write!!

    WordSlinger commented on Haiku Part 2: Regrets

    12-21-2009

    This is hard core, I hate feeling like this, :) WS

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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