Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y])

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Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y])

I know what you want
Hypnotically you flaunt
Your body with taunts

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Tempestlady commented on Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y])

12-10-2010

Are we all so transparent with our flirting? I wonder. Wonderfully stated and simple and succinct. Write on....

danmartyjake1 commented on Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y])

02-28-2010

In keeping with the 5/7/5 and doing it well with a different subject that is stimulating for the reader. Another masterful write. I will study you... so far I am inspired.

crazygirl77 commented on Haiku Part 6: T(eas[e/y])

12-25-2009

This haiku is short but seductive. It was a quick yet sensual read...very sexy!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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