Rain

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Rain

I’ve seen the rain.
Yeah, I’ve felt it too.
I’ve chased every broken dream until the end.
Countless times I’ve found a lifeline,
Just to suck it dry in the end.
I remember the day I believed in fabricated lies.
I’ll never forget the feeling…
As I tore down every last brick to that house you’ve been building.
Stacked up on arrogance,
Torn down by the ignorant bliss,
Eradicated by the hopeless feeling in the pit 
Of your stomach.
The crowd’s waiting…,
And so am I, 
That speech you’ve been saving for this day.
One more pause and surely they’ll catch on…
Stumbling before walking right, 
You really should have learned to crawl.
One more chuckle and you’re going to break..
I can see you squirm, 
Oh, I’ve been waiting for this.
I have to hand it to whoever it was
That made you sweat.
I felt the thunder resonate in my chest,
I saw the lightning streak across the sky,
I’ve felt the rain…,
Have you ever felt alive, before?
-Kaitlin Platti
I’ve seen the rain.
Yeah, I’ve felt it too.
I’ve chased every broken dream until the end.
Countless times I’ve found a lifeline,
Just to suck it dry in the end.



 
I remember the day I believed in fabricated lies.
I’ll never forget the feeling…
As I tore down every last brick to that house you’ve been building.
Stacked up on arrogance,
Torn down by the ignorant bliss,
Eradicated by the hopeless feeling in the pit 
Of your stomach.



 
The crowd’s waiting…,
And so am I, 
That speech you’ve been saving for this day.
One more pause and surely they’ll catch on…




Stumbling before walking right, 
You really should have learned to crawl.
One more chuckle and you’re going to break.



I can see you squirm, 
Oh, I’ve been waiting for this.
I have to hand it to whoever it was
That made you sweat.



I felt the thunder resonate in my chest,
I saw the lightning streak across the sky,
I’ve felt the rain…,



Have you ever felt alive, before?
-Kaitlin Platti

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StandingBear commented on Rain

10-01-2013

Wow! Always driven energy writing you possess! No letdowns here! Thank you for sharing! SBear

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Platti’s Poems (134)

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Felo-de-se 1
Battle Lines 0
Humanity 1
Gods 3
Rain 1
Let Me 3
Train Wreck 3
Somehow 1
Close Friends 1
Washed My Hands Of This 2
Tattoo 3
Mash 1
The Weeping Willow 1
Hollow 1
When Tomorrow Comes 1
The Ribbon 2
Blank 2
Won 1
Puzzle 1
Angels 2
Save Us 1
Down 2
Stakes 1
Drawing Board 1
Every 1
Okay 1
Faint 1
Thread 1
Vindictive 1
Scream 1
Fly 1
Draining 1
If You Only Knew 1
Horizon 1
Lies 1
Fall 1
Promise 1
Far Away 1
Dreams 1
Hand Print 1
Me 2
Drugs 1
Devil's Playground 1
Standing 1
Heartless 1
Sorry 1
Heights 3
Plunge 2
Honesty 1
Fire 1
Middle 1
Cry 1
The Last Leaf 1
Upside Down 1
Fallen Dawn 1
Dear Mother 1
Ghost 1
Stargaze 1
Hidden 1
Toy Soldiers 1
Drowning 1
Never Say Never 1
Trust 1
Days 1
Lost 1
Precipice 1
Daze 1
Always-Never 1
Quiet 1
Woods 2
Intentions 1
Intentions 1
We All Fall Down 1
Let It Burn 1
Alone 1
Save Me 1
Generations 1
New Scars 1
Never Be 1
Through Glass 1
Disappointmen
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1
S.O.S 2
Last Goodbye 3
Never 1
Dear Beloved 2
Past 4
Mankind 1
Fated 1
The Pills 5
Run 1
Game 1
Stain 5
Separate Ways 3
Memorize 3
Let It Go -2
Awake -9
Despise 1
Our Place 1
Innocence 1
If It Helps You 1
Steady 1
It's Not Suicide 3
Hold Me Tight 1
Don’t Let It Fade 1
New Dawn 2
War 2
Sunrise 2
Path Of Least Resistance 1
Happy 2
This Time 2
No Regrets 1
You Have My Heart 2
Shattered 2
Reality 1
Nightmare 3
Salvation 1
Unknown Reason 3
Unknown Soldier 2
Tired and Troubled Soul 1
A Hopeless Emotion 1
Another Damn Day 1
Humanity 2
Journey 1
Down Pour 2
Your Answer 1
Haunt 1
Sisters 2
Forgotten Memory 1
Abandonment 3
Statue 1
Give Up 2
Angel Of Death 2
Immune 3
Understanding 5