Memorize

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    • Platti
    • Getting back in the groove of writing again :)

    Memorize

    Soft fingers scurry
    Across every
    Vein
    Memorizing the feel
    Of the blood
    Coursing through
    A complex web of
    Life
    Much like two
    Lives, entangled
    In the most intimate
    Of all positions
    None the wiser
    Of the budding
    Emotions wound
    Up tight
    If one were to
    Let go
    Carelessly dive into
    The unknown far
    Above
    Their heads
    Neither comprehend
    That even though
    They are told to
    Tread slowly
    Rather than swim
    Away
    Baby we’ve already
    Drowned we’ll
    Stay afloat as
    Long as our
    Veins continue
    Holding our life
    In it’s light
    Grasp
    Just don’t let go
    Of my hand
    It may be too
    Early to tell
    And we may
    Have not a
    Blessing
    I will utter
    My feelings away
    Despite the
    Opposing forces,
    I love you.

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    xdavidabramx commented on Memorize

    05-30-2009

    Much love and also, thnx for the comments on mine! It is all very much appreciated and I never before realized that there really are people out there who support people and give that constructive criticism that everybody needs to survive! Thank u!

    Platti

    05/30/2009

    No problem at all, I try to give out pointers even though you really can't criticize a poem, because it usually comes from the heart ;) and your work, as well is amazing =D

    xdavidabramx commented on Memorize

    05-30-2009

    Devotional poetry like this is probably one of my favourite kinds of poetry, although, really and truly, I love it all. Same goes for all of your writing, I have to say that this is one of my personal favourites, but I love them all, none the less, because they each hold a meaning, not like some of the other poetry/songs/writings period that lack the one thing that makes these forms of expression great -- the substance! 10 out of 10.

    StandingBear commented on Memorize

    05-27-2009

    An intimate love poem of great proportions. Two lovers standing on the brink , on the edge of a precarious world. Great write. 10

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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