Past

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  • Getting back in the groove of writing again :)

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I was just thinking about pasts and such, this came off the top of my head, Enjoy?

Past

Faraway, in your
Distance clouded eyes,
A reflection grabs
At the edge of my
Senses,

Breathtaking scenes
Leave me speechless,
The darkness now
Nothing more than
A vague pulling at
The back of my
Conscience
 
Unmistakable as the
Blood on our hands
Pushing it all away,
I scoot closer to my
Demise,
 surely I'd
Have known, Had
You not been so
Kind,

Fighting against
My inner demons with
Me,
I'd never had done it
Alone,
Yet here I am,
Swallowed in regret,

My hand outstretched
Fingers gliding over the
Cool glass of the mirror,
Hoping...hoping that
What once was would
Stop haunting me

The blood on my hands,
Unmistakable as the
Shards fall, glittering snow,
Falling fast, each containing
A sliver of life that
Once was,

Dead eyes stare
Back, same color as
Mine, my reflection
Is all that's left,
The past has been
Shattered,
Now Blood covered shards
Under my feet.

~Kaitlin Platti~

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windsongs commented on Past

06-09-2013

forget about that-today is the first day of the rest of your life;)

Oblaidon commented on Past

07-28-2009

Interesting. Not sure I understand it all, but it is one of the better poems on this site.

Platti

07/30/2009

lol...thanks?

cottoncandi commented on Past

07-28-2009

You are very gifted keep writing this is very deep

Platti

07/28/2009

Thank you very much!! ^^

StandingBear commented on Past

07-28-2009

Strolling through and accepting the past for what it was has definitely led you to the present where you're able to ponder the future. Great kick@$$ write.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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