Listen Closely

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Listen Closely

the skrit skrit of my pen
branding this blank page

the sharp tock tock tock of high heels
striding purposefully over marble floors

the charming cloppity-clop of horse hooves
over the cobblestone streets

the magical, musical tinkling 
of a small brass bell

the deep thumping bum bum bum
of an expertly played bass guitar

the cheery clink of crystal
in  celebratory toast

the soft, deep sigh, mmmmmm
of a lover's moan 

achingly beautiful
these sounds alone are
worth living for... 

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HarverTomsson commented on Listen Closely

05-11-2010

There are other sounds just as definable, but your sampler is a good stimulus for the mind to keep working on a good thing.

simoneaugustus

05/12/2010

Thank you so much for reading, Harver! I always value your input and am so glad to see you stopped by!

ArgusWayne commented on Listen Closely

05-08-2010

Excellent! An old friend once told me 'The hell with stopping to SMELL the roses--I want time to listen to them bloom!' You nailed that sentiment here. Another favorite.

simoneaugustus

05/08/2010

I love that quote! I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. :)

ApaqRasgirl commented on Listen Closely

05-06-2010

great piece, I could almost hear the tones of each of those you described it so well, thanks for sharing. love Asha

simoneaugustus

05/07/2010

Thank you, Asha, for the kind words; it means so much to me!

MindNumbing commented on Listen Closely

05-06-2010

Nicely written, yet again... it's amazing how certain sounds continue their reverb long after they have physically vanished. I can still hear my dad's sigh each and every time I do something that I know he would consider stupid... I think that might keep me in line a little bit :)

simoneaugustus

05/07/2010

Thanks! And I know what you mean about that little sigh that becomes part of your conscience- my dad left one of those with me as well! I must admit, it's turned out to be one of the most useful gifts he gave to me. ;)

FranzJ commented on Listen Closely

05-05-2010

sounds - if you listen you can hear - - - - - - - -a lot

simoneaugustus

05/05/2010

Yes, 'hearing' and 'listening' are two vastly different things. Thank you for reading!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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