(at the stone of never ending)

8 Comments

(at the stone of never ending)









At The Stone of Never-Ending
WE meet within Love Balanced
Differences Distant
Mind With Hearts Soul Present
Observed
Melded
As
One





© 2005 origionalmerlin

Poem Comments

(8)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

ginga commented on (at the stone of never ending)

07-15-2009

A short and to-the-point write that gives the reader a sense of requited and "rock" love. I loved it. Ginga

symash commented on (at the stone of never ending)

07-08-2009

your mate is very lucky to have someone with such love and devotion put into words...i can only imagine how it is without the paper.

boomchild commented on (at the stone of never ending)

05-28-2009

And so it go's....one after the other after the other after the other.. Thank God, these are just awesome, tell me, what is it like? up there on top of the poetic pile that is, are you published?

kaitlynrylie commented on (at the stone of never ending)

05-17-2009

short and simple but gets your point across- well written

mrobb6488 commented on (at the stone of never ending)

05-12-2009

Short and sweet. You got your point across while using the form that I have come to know and love. I love the capitalization that put the emphasis on WE.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Blowing the dust off my muses wings... 0
Best teacher... 1
Center of everything...
.
4
The best part of every moment... 14
Gods' Hat Size 3
Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2
I am a Chef 3
For Your Information..
.
4
Smiling 6
my wish 20
anything less... 7
the choice is us 8
one whole we 9
from a text message to whom i Love 10
if you Think... check what you know... 10
see you always 5
less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2
chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5
Oregano The Difference 6
Stainless Union 14
scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13
Yes , and Yes Again ! 9
The Birth of the Queen 18
The Queens Repose 33
The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27
little dream 24
Cause The Music To Play 14
Long Live origionalpoet
ry.com
12
Pounding Lust 13
Typo Blues 15
Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Whisper 2
Enlightenment 1
When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3
Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
meloncholics annonomous 3
Sorry Dante 12
Moments With You. 10
Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
"All Night AS Well" 10
Presently 3
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
er collection #1)
5
The Touch Within 11
(at the stone of never ending) 8
Marathon 4
Flowers 7
Camelot 16
OZ isn't me 12
Hold my hand often 22
Mnogiye veshi (Many things ) 5
Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11
unspoken connotations 9
Coffee and Sex 30
To Kiss a star 33