Author's Comments:
"this was my first poem.. i was seven
..from hence came Origionalmerlin...

Have you once thought:
"Are we Camelot
or an Atlantis
unclaimed by the sea"?

What more is time
'cept some poet's rhyme?
A song to step to
when you're loved true..

© 1970 origionalmerlin

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knight4696 commented on Camelot


I can't even start to imagine - writing something like this when I was 7. You must've had one hell of childhood. To be able to express such a emotion and maturity. Great work - for an adult - nevermind a 7 yr old!

Paleidia commented on Camelot


You are certainly a born poet! You're probably an old soul. I loved this,. origionalmerlin.

laydbak1 commented on Camelot


You must've been a very, well read, 7 year old to have pieced together this short, yet vivid and descriptive verbage from ancient lore...

mcox commented on Camelot


You must be one of those whiz kids that have a specail gift endowed upon you. Its great that you have build upon your gift. that is quite a poem for a 7 year old. Thanks for inviting me to be your friend. I will enjoy your contributions of thought. Myrna Cox

wheelsal commented on Camelot


Seven, "wow". How could you have that kind of wisdom then? You have unique streetwise poetry. I have read only a couple and will get to more soon. I'm new on this.



to be accurate it was at six and a little over a half (still my seventh year though

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Blowing the dust off my muses wings... 0
Best teacher... 1
Center of everything...
The best part of every moment... 14
Gods' Hat Size 3
Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2
I am a Chef 3
For Your Information..
Smiling 6
my wish 20
anything less... 7
the choice is us 8
one whole we 9
from a text message to whom i Love 10
if you Think... check what you know... 10
see you always 5
less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2
chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5
Oregano The Difference 6
Stainless Union 14
scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13
Yes , and Yes Again ! 9
The Birth of the Queen 18
The Queens Repose 33
The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27
little dream 24
Cause The Music To Play 14
Long Live origionalpoet
Pounding Lust 13
Typo Blues 15
Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Whisper 2
Enlightenment 1
When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3
Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
meloncholics annonomous 3
Sorry Dante 12
Moments With You. 10
Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
"All Night AS Well" 10
Presently 3
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
er collection #1)
The Touch Within 11
(at the stone of never ending) 8
Marathon 4
Flowers 7
Camelot 16
OZ isn't me 12
Hold my hand often 22
Mnogiye veshi (Many things ) 5
Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11
unspoken connotations 9
Coffee and Sex 30
To Kiss a star 33