Momenti lyubvi

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Momenti lyubvi

(this poem is translated into english elsewhere in my postings.This is the language i composed it in.)











Momenti lyubvi nahodyat nas raspustivshimisya
i razvivshimisya,
Ya pokoryon tvoe y sush'nosti v polnom smirenii.
Tvoyo prikosnoveniye prinosit spokoystviye,
Tvoyo dihanie prinosit tainstvo,
Tvoya lyubov"
pomogayet mnye sush'estvovat'





thank you to all the non russian people that commented and rated this, it proved my point about the old rating system that is  thankfully changed, and is one of the reason i will not post poems here to be rated  till the site goes out of beta. please read my profile., if commenting on any of my exclusive non english poems please comment in the language i posted it in thank you)

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Forestbird commented on Momenti lyubvi

05-15-2009

Ochen krasivo i znachitelno. Zvuchit kak pesnya.Kajdoye slovo predstayet v svoei znachimosti i nepovtorimosti. Bolshinstvo slov tak tochni chto ih nevozmojno zamenit inachi poteryaetsya krasota i sila. Ya tolko ne soglasna so slovom "raspustivshimisya" Eto mojet znachit raspustivshiisya kak cvetok, no vtoroye znacheniye "poteryavshii kontrol nad svoim povedeniyem" ili bolee myagko-rasslabivshiisya (unwined?) V angliskom variante dissolving-rastvorivshiyesya. Eto prekrasno zvuchit no po russki

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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