Stainless Union

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Stainless Union

 

 

observed

ere

silence

within

silence

ere the coalescing

and arising of thought

in

pure

stainless

non-reflected being

self actualized self aware

self arising

the actualized

clear light essence

of that

which is us

joined as one

stands

non dependent arising

the rhythm

flows

between

ten thousand lifetimes

giving background

of that which is time

and that witch exists

before

during

and after

time

is

dissolved

 

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Artie commented on Stainless Union

04-23-2010

I like how you ended this - before during and after time is dissolved - there is much depth in this piece - 10 from me

origionalmerlin commented on Stainless Union

04-23-2010

as i often use forms in place of punctuation also to place pauses that the listener would hear if i read the poem aloud to them, this is an example, for those who mistake it for free style, they are incorrect as the roots of this are from a different plant altogether.. it is from music. Reply to Comment

devaamido commented on Stainless Union

04-22-2010

This is a beautiful piece that conveys its enigmatic description of That which is prior to illusion about as well as is possible in words. 10+

paxtruth commented on Stainless Union

04-19-2010

This really made me think. I had to read it more than once to begin to understand it. I love the cryptic style of this one-- I just looked up the word cryptic and it fits this poem exactly. Nice one

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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