Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
Eye to eye
I
see You
heart
to
heart
I
Feel
Your Need.
only one vote is needed
(awaiting the third aye)
© 2006 origionalmerlin
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
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Eye to eye
I
see You
heart
to
heart
I
Feel
Your Need.
only one vote is needed
(awaiting the third aye)
© 2006 origionalmerlin
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nightsky commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
07-12-2009
- I like it! The end is a little enigmatic--the 'aye' from within, or from 'the one seen'? Also, the words leave it unknown whether "need" is one-sided! 2 question/answers only the author knows--their license. :)
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symash commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
07-08-2009
- AYE !!!!!! i rated a couple of your poems but hit the "no thanks button " instead of the submit button ....sorry but i gave you high scores on all your poems .
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abbadejuju commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
04-25-2009
- excellent wordplay!
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Kalonji commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)
03-29-2009
- wow very short and well written the choice of words is amazing
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