Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)

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    Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)


    Eye to eye
    I
    see You
    heart
    to
    heart
    I
    Feel
    Your Need.
    only one vote is needed
    (awaiting the third aye)


    © 2006 origionalmerlin

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    nightsky commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)

    07-12-2009

    I like it! The end is a little enigmatic--the 'aye' from within, or from 'the one seen'? Also, the words leave it unknown whether "need" is one-sided! 2 question/answers only the author knows--their license. :)

    symash commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)

    07-08-2009

    AYE !!!!!! i rated a couple of your poems but hit the "no thanks button " instead of the submit button ....sorry but i gave you high scores on all your poems .

    abbadejuju commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)

    04-25-2009

    excellent wordplay!

    Kalonji commented on Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeater collection #1)

    03-29-2009

    wow very short and well written the choice of words is amazing

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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