little dream

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Another one    written  in  european site
(in connextion  with  the  enerya'  series)  its in english  here  if  you want it in welsh... you have to ask

little dream







Could you stand a little dream?
one that you would want never to wake from?
a tree , a hill, a bright clean stream
(could you stand a little dream)
and hand in hand there you and i
lips legs and all entwined neath sunny sky
making our music you and I..
(could you stand a little dream?)


© 2010 origionalmerlin





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pocketofdreams6 commented on little dream

04-26-2010

I can totally picture Lou Reed singing this! A little Niko in the background vocals, nicely done!

origionalmerlin

04/26/2010

good call with lou reed

CatsMeow commented on little dream

11-15-2009

I certainly could stand that dream. Nicely done. I have my deepest appreciattion for love in any form.. Thanks.

purpleswan commented on little dream

10-03-2009

I know it's been a while but this one is so cute and so seductcive at the same time. I could use a little dream. Nice work Andrew. Swan

teasasue commented on little dream

08-10-2009

makes me want to run home and grab my husband and go to the creek for a while. Nice

wwjd72 commented on little dream

08-03-2009

seduductively pensive to a rythmic beat,very inspiring and mentally captivating.nicely done.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

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