unspoken connotations

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    unspoken connotations





    It is nice
    when we go
    for a friendly ride
    outside
    or inside
    it all
    comes together

    on any
    sunny day
    or in stormy weather
    I love you
    and you
    love me too
    (wack a doo wack a doo)

    It is nice
    when we go
    for a friendly ride
    outside
    or inside
    it all
    comes together

    and im so glad
    that you
    are you
    when we take
    the time to do
    the friendliest thing
    no matter where we are
    under a roof
    underneath a star
    Friendly
    between just us two

    It is nice
    when we go
    for a friendly ride
    outside
    or inside
    it all
    comes together




    © 2009 origionalmerlin




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    nightsky commented on unspoken connotations

    07-11-2009

    So sweet, natural--purely lovely, it says so much in an easy conversation.

    symash commented on unspoken connotations

    07-08-2009

    wack a doo ! wack a doo ! this poem gave me a chuckle or two wack a doo ! wack a doo !

    kaitlynrylie commented on unspoken connotations

    05-17-2009

    fun and peaceful... i enjoyed it

    purpleswan commented on unspoken connotations

    04-25-2009

    I enjoyed this one. Fun, yet real.

    LeLover commented on unspoken connotations

    04-20-2009

    Funny and playful.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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