Momenti , {Moments of Love }

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Momenti , {Moments of Love }





(Russian)

Momenti lyubvi nahodyat nas raspustivshimisya
i razvivshimisya,
Ya pokoryon tvoe y sush'nosti v polnom smirenii.
Tvoyo prikosnoveniye prinosit spokoystviye,
Tvoyo dihanie prinosit tainstvo,
Tvoya lyubov"
pomogayet mnye sush'estvovat'




(English)

moments of love find us
dissolving and expanding
I am submitted
to your very essence
in full humbleness of awe
simplicity surrenders me
totally to the love
you touch and make Holy
you breathe and make sacred you
love and I exist




© 2009 origionalmerlin

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Artie commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

04-23-2010

I really enjoyed this piece. The first two lines really caught my attention - It gives the feeling of a living entity instead of just an emotion - 10 from me

Caprisun commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

08-14-2009

I thought, for so long, about what I could say to you about this - your poem. I found, that only the sound you draw from my lips as I read your words is appropriate. So -MMMMMM. And a double MMMMMM.

mars commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

07-02-2009

I must say it rhymes much better in Russian. Grand words of love, and powerful.

Ravoya commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

05-24-2009

i like that you wrote it in two languages and so it feels like it's not limited. i know that no poetry is limited but writing it in two languages makes it feel less limited than just in English.

BlackKnightOS commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

05-14-2009

I like the way you used two languages in this poem. Very nice.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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