Momenti , {Moments of Love }

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    Momenti , {Moments of Love }




    (Russian)

    Momenti lyubvi nahodyat nas raspustivshimisya
    i razvivshimisya,
    Ya pokoryon tvoe y sush'nosti v polnom smirenii.
    Tvoyo prikosnoveniye prinosit spokoystviye,
    Tvoyo dihanie prinosit tainstvo,
    Tvoya lyubov"
    pomogayet mnye sush'estvovat'




    (English)

    moments of love find us
    dissolving and expanding
    I am submitted
    to your very essence
    in full humbleness of awe
    simplicity surrenders me
    totally to the love
    you touch and make Holy
    you breathe and make sacred you
    love and I exist




    © 2009 origionalmerlin

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    Artie commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

    04-23-2010

    I really enjoyed this piece. The first two lines really caught my attention - It gives the feeling of a living entity instead of just an emotion - 10 from me
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    Caprisun commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

    08-14-2009

    I thought, for so long, about what I could say to you about this - your poem. I found, that only the sound you draw from my lips as I read your words is appropriate. So -MMMMMM. And a double MMMMMM.
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    mars commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

    07-02-2009

    I must say it rhymes much better in Russian. Grand words of love, and powerful.
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    Ravoya commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

    05-24-2009

    i like that you wrote it in two languages and so it feels like it's not limited. i know that no poetry is limited but writing it in two languages makes it feel less limited than just in English.
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    BlackKnightOS commented on Momenti , {Moments of Love }

    05-14-2009

    I like the way you used two languages in this poem. Very nice.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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