Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


Mnogiye veshi (Many things )

Mnogiye veshi
vipali iz moyevo vnimaniya i fokusa
iz-za tvoyey lyubvi.
V pyerviye u myenya
yest' svoboda lyubit',
lyubya tyebya Moyi glaza - tvoi,
ya vyes' tvoy.

Many things
have fallen away
from my attention
and focus
all is made light by you
all is made in love by you
banal words
can only point
no other attracts me
as i find
for the first time
i have the freedom to love
by loving you
my eyes are yours
my all is yours

© 2009 origionalmerlin

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nightsky commented on Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


Astonishingly Beautiful. It feels very intimate, like a soul caress.....I adore this one.

papertears commented on Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


Yes ....and another good one! My favorite line other attracts me....I've been there! Does she appreciate your sweet tidings to her? I like this one too.

Ravoya commented on Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


i like it because it makes me think that there's some hope in my life for love after all. keep up your writing it's really good

SusanLee commented on Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


P S: this is like that paint stroke that went right.

SusanLee commented on Mnogiye veshi (Many things )


From the sea of love. It all sings it song to me. Words bright,lite,simply said. Like a quiet moment with sssiilence. on purpose. I want this one for myself to read when I need this "essence". Essence

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

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Best teacher... 1
Center of everything...
The best part of every moment... 14
Gods' Hat Size 3
Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2
I am a Chef 3
For Your Information..
Smiling 6
my wish 20
anything less... 7
the choice is us 8
one whole we 9
from a text message to whom i Love 10
if you Think... check what you know... 10
see you always 5
less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2
chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5
Oregano The Difference 6
Stainless Union 14
scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13
Yes , and Yes Again ! 9
The Birth of the Queen 18
The Queens Repose 33
The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27
little dream 24
Cause The Music To Play 14
Long Live origionalpoet
Pounding Lust 13
Typo Blues 15
Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Whisper 2
Enlightenment 1
When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3
Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
meloncholics annonomous 3
Sorry Dante 12
Moments With You. 10
Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
"All Night AS Well" 10
Presently 3
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
er collection #1)
The Touch Within 11
(at the stone of never ending) 8
Marathon 4
Flowers 7
Camelot 16
OZ isn't me 12
Hold my hand often 22
Mnogiye veshi (Many things ) 5
Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11
unspoken connotations 9
Coffee and Sex 30
To Kiss a star 33