Moments With You.


Moments With You.

moments of love find us
dissolving and expanding
I am submitted
to your very essence
in full humbleness of awe
simplicity surrenders me
totally to the love
you touch and make Holy
you breathe and make sacred you
love and I exist

© 2005 origionalmerlin

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nightsky commented on Moments With You.


oops...late night write in last post--I amend that to say our true selves can only partially exist sans amour--and maybe not for very long. Our souls need love like plants need sun, air, and water.

nightsky commented on Moments With You.


The essence and melting intimates something of the Divine....dissoving and expanding, like air or liquid, ether of the Universe. 'Humility and awe' are amazing to come to in themselves.....and surrender shares language with the mystical. 'You love and I exist', is so POWERFUL, so simple and true--without another being able to truly love, our true selves cannot exist. The expression of these thoughts is Incrediblly Beautiful--it makes me feel wonder and awe to read it!

yulybeauty commented on Moments With You.

07-05-2009 are totally taken by your feelings, sublime

orangepony commented on Moments With You.


love of showing come from within that everlasting, between two souls, spirits of two become one into that never ending adventure of life unpredictable road,heart of your romance is always pure of a river that flow to reach the all mighty one. carolyn

laydbak1 commented on Moments With You.


The voice here describes in a very simplistic, fragile, yet delicate tone how much they love this person... Good write...

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origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Blowing the dust off my muses wings... 0
Best teacher... 1
Center of everything...
The best part of every moment... 14
Gods' Hat Size 3
Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2
I am a Chef 3
For Your Information..
Smiling 6
my wish 20
anything less... 7
the choice is us 8
one whole we 9
from a text message to whom i Love 10
if you Think... check what you know... 10
see you always 5
less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2
chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5
Oregano The Difference 6
Stainless Union 14
scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13
Yes , and Yes Again ! 9
The Birth of the Queen 18
The Queens Repose 33
The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27
little dream 24
Cause The Music To Play 14
Long Live origionalpoet
Pounding Lust 13
Typo Blues 15
Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1
Whisper 2
Enlightenment 1
When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3
Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
meloncholics annonomous 3
Sorry Dante 12
Moments With You. 10
Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
"All Night AS Well" 10
Presently 3
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
er collection #1)
The Touch Within 11
(at the stone of never ending) 8
Marathon 4
Flowers 7
Camelot 16
OZ isn't me 12
Hold my hand often 22
Mnogiye veshi (Many things ) 5
Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11
unspoken connotations 9
Coffee and Sex 30
To Kiss a star 33