scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


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    ...(blush) just thinking out loud.. (nuff said..)

    scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    scrambled eggs
    really needed
    we  can skip 

    looking forward

    the mornings
     that follow
     with you

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    FUBAR93 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    idk why I need to even comment, since it goes without saying you're awesome ; D

    MindNumbing commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    I love a poem that can speak it's message clearly with brevity. This is such a beautiful sentiment in all it's simplicity. Thanks for sharing :)

    ladyvirgo commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    This poem was GREAT!.... First The title caught my attention and I was very pleased with what I read on your bio and your poem....Kudos

    FreeBird02 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    How can one top Chaos128's comments on this simple but touching work you have presented before us. Breakfast is great, eye to eye, with a loved one. But as you say this can go all left undone while these two, hand in hand, walk away. Good job. FreeBird 02

    Chaos128 commented on scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast


    A clear and forthright message with a little sideways twist, and the lack of bells and whistles making the message stronger. Very original ha ha.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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