Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem)


Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem)

(Bad Anniversery,written in chatroom april1,2009)

having a real rough night
1 year go this hour in Syracuse university upstate medical hospital the person in the bed next to me was raped and accidentally unplugged by an orderly
  they had moved all the patients in the burn unit to the post op ward while they fixed some plumbing problems, and painted
as the post op patients recovered they were moved out, leaving an old lady on a respirator and i next to each other
leaving us with one orderly and a couple of student nurses till the staff came on early in the morning
a couple of phone calls and "we are open for business" the orderly saying he had the security system disabled the girls went out while the orderly and other people had their way with the old lady
(i went wide alert when the orderly said he brought his own razor from home since the hospital ones were wimpy
it wasn't hard to figure out what was going on when he said to one of his friends, i knew i should of have taken the hand job
the guys left to catch up with the student nurses and the orderly pushed her bed back in place
he discovered about an hour later that he had unplugged her life support
the student nurses freaked out and he tried to macho his way through
he said don't worry about him, i have him red lined, and i know where his fiancee lives.
they kept freaking when the head nurse and staff came in
(after the orderly pushed the life support system out of the ward into the hall, saying that they would think the cuts on her ass were done by the surgeons
i tried to sign myself out the next morning (April 2nd)
my fiancee had me moved to a semi private room for a few days, while the hospital staff lined up home health care aids for me.. i left and spent a week at my oldest brothers house, while dss found me a nursing home to be in for a month
once out of there i told my family , the dss, and the home health care nurses that came every day to change my dressings my family told me to drop it.
they told dss etc that i imagined it, due to the massive pain killers.
 he orderly and one of the students left the hospital the morning of April 2

© 2009 origionalmerlin

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merlin commented on Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem)


Comments not solicited or appropriate, this is part of what actuality happened to me when visiting New York(. see closest call part 1)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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