meloncholics annonomous

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    meloncholics annonomous








    after hours of sleep
    deep and dreaming
    i peeked through a window in my dreams
    saw her there through both our windows, felt my longing
    and saw the age and the beauty
    of her that is the naming of my soul

    though in sleep
    conscious awakened
    i passed through windows doors and walls
    my hand on her head touching her hair calling her to me
    it was enough for me, though i want more
    till perhaps somday it wont be drempt

    after hours of sleep
    deep and dreaming
    i peeked through a window in my dreams
    saw her there through both our windows, felt my longing
    and saw the age and the beauty
    of her that is the naming of
    my soul






    © 2009 origionalmerlin





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    CatsMeow commented on meloncholics annonomous

    11-12-2009

    Good thoughtful poem with texture. But does somday =someday and needs to be corrected? I am dyslexic and I often misspell words. I just noticed that. Spelling. I am trying to adjust to your unique lower case format. Interesting content with true reminisce of poems by T. S. Eliot. Sincerely, CatsMeow
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    Tempestlady commented on meloncholics annonomous

    07-15-2009

    A dream lover, a soul able to touch another on another plane, in another realm. A wonderful poem, a unique perspective, and an insightful mind. Loved enterting the thought. Great write.
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    Crush commented on meloncholics annonomous

    06-08-2009

    I really liked this. There are some great poets here and you are definitely one of them. Thank you, it was a treat.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    origionalmerlin’s Poems (66)

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    The best part of every moment... 14 10/02/2012
    Gods' Hat Size 3 10/02/2012
    Occanum, Susquehanna .(.morning with a hint of noon) 2 08/16/2012
    I am a Chef 3 08/13/2012
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    Smiling 6 11/25/2010
    my wish 20 08/01/2010
    anything less... 7 05/24/2010
    the choice is us 8 05/18/2010
    one whole we 9 04/30/2010
    from a text message to whom i Love 10 04/26/2010
    if you Think... check what you know... 10 04/23/2010
    see you always 5 04/23/2010
    less than half an hour till ...seeing you 2 04/23/2010
    chocolate mousse cookies and eternity (whichever lasts longer) 5 04/22/2010
    Oregano The Difference 6 04/20/2010
    Stainless Union 14 04/15/2010
    scrambled eggs and the future for breakfast 13 03/04/2010
    Yes , and Yes Again ! 9 02/27/2010
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    The Queens Repose 33 07/05/2009
    The Pissed Piskeys Prank 27 07/05/2009
    little dream 24 07/05/2009
    Cause The Music To Play 14 07/29/2009
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    Pounding Lust 13 05/28/2009
    Typo Blues 15 08/08/2009
    Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1 05/21/2009
    Closest Call (part 1 (not fiction or a poem) 1 05/21/2009
    Whisper 2 05/26/2009
    Enlightenment 1 05/26/2009
    When She Loves Me 6 08/12/2009
    All Night 1 05/25/2009
    Till Your Mind Melts Away (1. warmup) 3 08/13/2009
    Wings 3 05/20/2009
    Angels shall sing thee to rest 1 05/25/2009
    The Coming Of The Queen 0 05/25/2009
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    Many Things 4 05/25/2009
    If the World were a Bed 10 05/25/2009
    Eternity 16 05/25/2009
    From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22 05/25/2009
    "All Night AS Well" 10 05/25/2009
    Presently 3 05/24/2009
    Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
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    Camelot 16 05/25/2009
    OZ isn't me 12 05/25/2009
    Hold my hand often 22 05/25/2009
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