Best teacher...

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Best teacher...




  and thus far
in this life
 you
have
taught me
 what it feels like to find
 you
to find us at the
same moment
 and how it feels
 to lose you forever
(in appearance only)



Happy Birthday
 from the one
 who you can
 without any doubt
know
loves you.

always
 seeing you
with fresh eyes
 and l
oving you
more
 in each
 of our existences
 yes..
 I see you
in all manifestations
 and always
 feel
 your hand
in mine
 and
us
in our arms
 closely held
 as
only two 
who
are one
can be held.

Happy Birthday
 from the one
 who you can
 without any doubt
know
loves you.

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Tempestlady commented on Best teacher...

02-27-2013

So nice to know that this kind of loves exists. So special, so intimate, so unconditional which makes it all the more pure. A really lovely poem, rare in its earnestness and honestness. Write on................Tlady

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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