The Touch Within

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The Touch Within








Being held
in each others arms
a blessing
The inner touch
ahhh
happens constantly
since our first hug
making
any
outward appearances
worthless illusion

The inner touch
of our once two souls
resolved
into one soul
a sacrament
for eternity

Being held
in each others arms
a blessing





© 2005 origionalmerlin


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knight4696 commented on The Touch Within

09-18-2009

A pleasure to read. A warm and passionate write. You have a way of drawing your readers into your world and holding them captive. Awaiting another verse. Great job

suzystars commented on The Touch Within

07-29-2009

Nice read I feel the connection as one. Thank you for taking me there.

debb commented on The Touch Within

07-14-2009

I read several of your poems and i like them, like others have commented you have to listen to them with your soul.

symash commented on The Touch Within

07-08-2009

made me cry with my heart filled with every word written. you are definately a poet among poets

laydbak1 commented on The Touch Within

07-04-2009

Another very simple and eloquent statement of deep love... Nice write...

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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The Queens Repose 33
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All Night 1
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Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
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Sorry Dante 12
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Flowers 7
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