my wish

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my wish





I wish
 you
grant 
yourself
 gentleness
joy
 hope
 and
 the ability
to
 receive
 and
cognate
 love
create us
 with me

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Milkman commented on my wish

01-02-2011

very simple and too the point, especially like the line "create us...with me" it really speaks to the heart of relationships and should always be keep in mind..... good work

aw3haiku

02/14/2011

milkman's on it! Nicely done OP!

Luwonda commented on my wish

12-28-2010

I love this poem! I like how the way it grants a wish of joy, love and hope to anyone that believes.

optimistic commented on my wish

12-01-2010

This is a poem to wake up in the morning to and grant people good life and love peace joy happiness.

Krystle commented on my wish

11-02-2010

It's been quite a while since Ive been on here.. I love this very beautiful! Hope your doing well!

anaisnais commented on my wish

10-28-2010

Beautifully written, well done I really enjoyed the straight forward simplicity of it!

amby11

08/15/2012

Simplicity...class...precise diction

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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